India Zh'ane
Who is she?
A girl with a smiley day
And loves a shopping spree
No...
India
Who is she?
Her name is from Sanskrit,
Meaning a body of water.
No, she is not the country
But she is a daughter.
She is independent,
Confident,
Argumentative,
and loves to smile.
She is India Zh'ane
POW! POW! POW! (Onomatopoeia)
Zh'ane
Who is she?
India's middle name
So, that's who she must be.
Zh'ane
Her name means a gift from God
It is know in Slavic, Hebrew, and English
Meaning Jane, merciful, and gracious
She was named after
A 1990's singing duo called Zhané
By her grandmother
India Zh'ane
Always hated her middle name
As people would pronounce it
Zane like Jane
even though it was
Zha - NAY
She is magnetic (Metaphor)
Attracted to peoples problems
And there to give advice
She always welcomes
India Zh'ane is caring,
Generous,
And friendly
But she knows how to
prevent things from going too far
She is dramatic
When she worries
She is like the Titanic (Simile)
Sinking slowly
So,
India Zh'ane
Who is she?
She is a girl
She is me..
Your poem was put together really good
ReplyDeleteI liked how you ended your poem.
ReplyDeleteThat was a good poem it went together nicely
ReplyDeleteDo you think your middle name fits you? 🙇
ReplyDeleteYour name is kool. Good job on the poem.
ReplyDeleteI liked you poem a lot! I especially liked the parts where you talk about how YOU feel about your name.
ReplyDeleteYour poem seemed well thought out and it had a nice flow to it . I liked it a lot . Good job (:
ReplyDeleteI like your poem! All that was written is true to who you are.
ReplyDeleteI like how you ended it and the literary elements you used.
ReplyDeleteI like your poem very much, literally everything about it is good to me good job (:
ReplyDeleteaw that was cute, even if it was long, it was definitely worth listening to.
ReplyDeleteI like how you started the poem asking the reader who India was and at the end you said it was you. I thought that was really cool
ReplyDeleteI like your post and finally figure out how to say your middle name.
ReplyDeleteI liked how your name is unique and how you wrote a poem instead of a paragraph
ReplyDeleteI liked how u asked the same question through out the poem and then answered it at the end.
ReplyDeleteIndia, I love the literally elements you used. Your metaphors and smilies really give your readers a clear picture.
ReplyDelete*snaps* you definitely over achieved, AS ALWAYS! Your poem was wonderful!
ReplyDeleteLol thanks
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